Not a sentence in and there's a comma with no space after it.Originally Posted by Roxas
Finished my review. Probably my best one so far I feel.
If anyone wants to read.
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Vagrant Wizard
Not a sentence in and there's a comma with no space after it.Finished my review. Probably my best one so far I feel.
If anyone wants to read.
Spoiler warning:
Vagrant Wizard
After scanning through the review I think it needs more structuring.
Trophy Hunter
Shit. Writing at 3 in the morning definitely isn't something I should do anymore.Not a sentence in and there's a comma with no space after it.
Any tips?
Vagrant Wizard
I don't think you need to refer to it by name every time you mention it. Mostly I think you bounce around too much. Comparisons are much more suitable within a series, even if you're comparing to other games from the developer I'd try to limit them.
Vagrant Wizard
I don't think it's too bad for a rough draft. You should post rough drafts to a hidden section, if you can, before posting a finalized version. That way you can check formatting issues while you're cleaning up the text.
Last edited by Slacker Magician; 31st-July-2016 at 18:12.
Trophy Hunter
Appreciate the tips.I'll have to keep them in my head.
As for now, I have to go and shop with my girlfriend. Oh joy.
Meat suit
Was about to post this.
Older than you think
Almost messed my 3DS up, by going for beta Gateway stuff, I forgot to backup my nand so having to re-update to 9.20 the homebrew method
A very long and risky process but it worked
Will try the Gateway again
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Battle God
I just played one of my best games ever in LoL
Not like anyone cares
Meat suit
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Yikes. Im working on getting stuff installed on my brother's PSVita.Almost messed my 3DS up, by going for beta Gateway stuff, I forgot to backup my nand so having to re-update to 9.20 the homebrew method
A very long and risky process but it worked
Will try the Gateway again
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Vagrant Wizard
Nem cares.I just played one of my best games ever in LoL
Not like anyone cares
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