The Chip n Dale-Out: connecting...

[Corey]

It was actually really hard to read. You may want to look into finding an editor. The review itself was uh...fine, I suppose. But it didn't really seem to flow very well.

Ok I was actually being nice. Honestly it was really bad. I'm not sure if you just forgot what you were writing, but you frequently just dropped sentences all together. There were numerous typos and grammatical errors, and a lot of what you said just sounded like rambling to me. It was in no way informative, and even the opinions you had were more about your personal skill level and nostalgia for the older titles instead of the one you were reviewing.

Cosmetic changes have taken ahold of the combatants, but with your KI points that you gain from playing the game and completing what are called Title Challenges. The Title Challenges is a new feature where you complete specific things, such as doing a 10hit combo with Jago, Orchid, etc.

This is terrible. You are a bad person for writing this.

Each character now also have what’s called Instinct Mode, which depending on your character does completely different things. For example, Jagp will gradually recover his current life bar by advancing and attacking. As well as increasing the speed of recovery on potential damage and a +4 frame advantage on all attacks, while Spinal will gain 5 skulls used for his Curse Mechanic.

Don't talk about frame advantage or anything someone who hasn't played the game wouldn't know about (5 skulls) in a review. Keep it concise and to the point.

While danger moves, attacks that were present in the first 2 games, and were a string of button presses to finish or humiliate your opponents. Double Helix did state however, they are coming back in Season 2.

Again, seems like you just forgot what you were saying and moved on. I really want to sound like a dick, but everything about that review was bad.

Find an editor, or at least give what you wrote a quick once over to find the painfully obvious errors.

The text that describes what your images depict should be centered under the picture and perhaps a smaller font or italicized with some breathing room for the next paragraph. As it is now it seems "an example of a game lobby" is part of the review.

[Sheras]

That's right, my bad. I can't keep you and gare and crusher all straight.

I always had fast queue times for dungeons being a healer

[Sheras]

Ok I was actually being nice. Honestly it was really bad. I'm not sure if you just forgot what you were writing, but you frequently just dropped sentences all together. There were numerous typos and grammatical errors, and a lot of what you said just sounded like rambling to me. It was in no way informative, and even the opinions you had were more about your personal skill level and nostalgia for the older titles instead of the one you were reviewing.

This is terrible. You are a bad person for writing this.

Don't talk about frame advantage or anything someone who hasn't played the game wouldn't know about (5 skulls) in a review. Keep it concise and to the point.

Again, seems like you just forgot what you were saying and moved on. I really want to sound like a dick, but everything about that review was bad.

Find an editor, or at least give what you wrote a quick once over to find the painfully obvious errors.

The text that describes what your images depict should be centered under the picture and perhaps a smaller font or italicized with some breathing room for the next paragraph. As it is now it seems "an example of a game lobby" is part of the review.

You must spread some reputation around before giving it Corey again.

DAMN THE WORLD

[Corey]

I meant don't want to sound like a dick. GUESS I SHOULD TAKE MY OWN ADVICE!

[FlavaFlave]

I always had fast queue times for dungeons being a healer

I'll bet you did

@Corey
Damn son, I chose to keep my mouth shut on this one, but I think you basically nailed everything that was wrong with that review.
Roxas, you need to make an outline before you write anything - make some bullet points and cover specific areas like gameplay, graphics, sound, internet functionality, etc. Group all information into said categories so it at least has structure and flows better.

[Iamerror]

There's going to be a Jem and the Holograms movie!!Hopefully it will be truly,truly outrageous.

[Sprung]

-___- You guys can quit being dicks anytime now. It's not funny anymore.

NAAWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW

[Corey]

It would appear I have killed the hangout.

[Warrior]

It would appear I have killed the hangout.

Naw, it's just sleeping..........the kind that has no pulse kinda sleep

[MGS:solid snake]

but what's is the OST do you want (exactly the name of the game)

[Ace Ventura]

It would appear I have killed the hangout.

Nope, I was revising the review and playing Demons Souls.

[Zaladane]

There's going to be a Jem and the Holograms movie!!Hopefully it will be truly,truly outrageous.

[Sheras]

I'll bet you did .

Apparently though tanks are in super high demand now.

[Iamerror]

How is everyone?

[Spose']

Frustrated.