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http://boxarts.nds-roms.com/?rom=1618
trauma center rip off :lol
now im off to play it :wacko:
Hypnos: Listen to my trance track.
http://rapidshare.com/files/83667771/upupup.mp3.html
Trance ain't really my thing but I'll give it a spin.
Well, it ain't bad. Not that I'm really in a position to judge electronic music since I barely listen to anything in that style outside of the noise/power electronics/avant-garde industrial stuff.
You could find a more creative base drumbeat though. I know the 4/4 kick and the kick/snare (at least I think it's a distorted snare sample you're using) is used a lot in trance for a reason, but adding some more unusual percussion might fit better with the noisy, rolling synths you have in the foreground. Even if it's just adding a few kick-kick-kick-snare or snare/tom sections.
edit: Since we're passing around things to critique, have a read over my WIP story
http://www.fictionpress.com/u/595211/
I read it the other day, unless you've changed anything. Same as you, it's not the usual type of stuff I read, but it was fairly interesting. I wanted to read more.
Also, I can't work on that track anymore. I accidently closed the program I was using and didn't save it. :\