Ah, I see.I read the short story at the link. I'm terrible with constructive criticism, so I won't even try, but I'll say that it managed to hold my attention at 5AM on little to no sleep.
Please send me anything else you come up with, if it's not too much trouble.
Ahaha, I can't claim to be much better.I have two unfinished novels and a half dozen unfinished short stories that I haven't done anything with for a while now. Everytime I start to make progress with one thing, my mind flits off to another completely unrelated idea. Sometimes it's a good thing, in that I can incorporate said idea into what I'm currently writing. Most of the time, though, it's something so out of the way that it demands its own piece...
My advice? get used to just belting out little drabbles and save them somewhere. 50-200 odd words, just a scene in what may or may not be a larger story.
Gives you something to come back on when you're out of inspiration and gets the rogue ideas out of the head so you can focus a bit better.
Then maybe he should learn to be honest about his feelings, instead of bottling them up behind a wall of sex jokes. *sulks*
For love and justice, I am the pretty sailor-suited 38GB Sailor Moon torrent! In the name of the moon, I will punish your bandwidth and free space!
Estimated time to completion: 2 weeks. Dear me. And I'm probably just going to watch about two episodes and realise that it's a big mistake. ^^; Oh well. At least I'm using my bandwidth for something...
Well it all dates back to my grandfather's days, where he tried to cross breed trout with goldfish. Then while attempting to artificially inseminate a goldfish, he slipped and hit his head. This lead to a rather sizable welt not to mention massive brain damage. Immediately afterwards he attempted to eat a baby. I figured to reference was OBVIOUS.
On the ass.
It's how I show loveOriginally Posted by Elin
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