something i wrote

[Koichi]

This was written for a story I'm writing called Silver Rain. The band's name is Sin and their vocalist wrote this after his sister committed suicide.

Never

Couldn�t tell that something was wrong
You always wore a smile
Never knew that beneath it all
You were hurting inside

You never called for help
Never said that you couldn�t take it
You never asked for a helping hand
You always hid the pain you felt
Never letting anyone see

Tears of blood running down your face
Hands trembling as you cry
Wanting to leave it all behind
You close your eyes and try to hide

Feeling lost as you walk around
Smiling at everyone as you cry inside
Feeling like you�ve lost all hope
You hold on, but can�t handle life

You never asked to talk
Never said that it hurt inside
You never seemed upset
You always smiled despite it all
Never showing the pain you felt

Tears of blood running down your face
Hands trembling as you cry
Wanting to leave it all behind
You close your eyes and try to hide

I didn�t think there was something wrong
Didn�t know that you were gone
Didn�t expect to find you there
A knife lying in a pool of blood

I never knew you wanted help
Never thought that you were hurt
I never asked you to talk with me
I always thought you were okay
I didn�t know you were in pain

[Roux!]

OK, just one comment: Someone's bound to misundertand your post and give his/her condolences out... XD

[Ryan]

Well the people that are like that shouldnt post then. But those are some good lyrics. Sorry to hear that that happened.

[Koichi]

Well the people that are like that shouldnt post then. But those are some good lyrics. Sorry to hear that that happened.

Nothing happened. It's just a story that I'm writing. I was just in the mood to randomly kill off a character in the first chapter and have it be a suicide.

[Roux!]

Well the people that are like that shouldnt post then. But those are some good lyrics. Sorry to hear that that happened.

Did you just prove my point, or are you just feeling pitty for a fictional character from a story you haven't even read...?

[Koichi]

Did you just prove my point, or are you just feeling pitty for a fictional character from a story you haven't even read...?

To be honest, it hasn't even been written yet.

[Ryan]

Wow. I totally read that wrong. I thaught it was a song for someone that commited suicide for real. Umm...Yeah. Shutup Konami Man.

*Runs Away*

[Roux!]

Awww... Hug for you!

[Koichi]

A lot of people told me that they heard me wrong when I said the guy's sister committed suicide. They kept saying 'tell him that I'm sorry to hear that'. Then I laughed and explained it for them once again.

[Roux!]

Haha! Booyah! That's just how keane I truly am... Get it...? "Keane"...? Man that song is annoying after the nth time you've heard it...

You should start this thread all over again, maybe...?

[Ryan]

So you laughed at me?

[Koichi]

So you laughed at me?

Not at you DIRECTLY.

[Dingy]

It's really good Megami, hope your story works out well. I'm feeling sorry for the poor guy, please make him a loving gf or something, say by the 3rd chapter or so;p

[Ziegfried]

Well, this wasn't alright so much as a reason to be obsessed with you for years to come. As in, I liked it pretty much.


Post-Dingy edit: Hmm. I kind of let the characters and stories flow from themselves when I write things, and don't engineer stories at all... Dingy seems to think everyone does.

[Koichi]

It's really good Megami, hope your story works out well. I'm feeling sorry for the poor guy, please make him a loving gf or something, say by the 3rd chapter or so;p

Well, Chris is kind of a player. And bi. I'm not sure what I'm doing with him.