let me be...

[Solitude]

Let me hide in my illusions.
Let me seek peace,
Peace, which this world cannot offer me.
Let me dwindle in my loneliness,
As none see the sights,
Me eyes provide me.
Dwindle till this life holds on to me,
Till my breath becomes mist,
To add to this fog .
Let me breathe�
And breathe be its only consequence.
Let my wounds heal,
Add no sorrow, no pity,
For my spilt blood.
If light exists,
Why do I face the shadows?
Which hand,
Curbs my turning back?
Why cannot I,
See what they see,
Hear what they hear,
Say what they say.
Is it a crime for me to,
See what I see,
Hear what I hear,
Say what I say?
Have I lived this life�s fortune,
Did I miss,
My chance for contemplation?
Is the answer too obvious,
To complain?
Let me contemplate�
Give me time�.
But none have any to give.
In my loneliness,
I have grown,
Only to ask more of it.
So, let me be�.
For the changes you ask of me,
Ask changes in you.
And in my drifting loneliness,
I have forgotten�what it is to ask.
And in my drifting loneliness,
I have reached my own shore, of identity.
So, let me run,
To seek solace,within myself.
We have both lost ,each other,
And the world a single entity, left to describe�
The world�just everything, outside me�alien to me�.
Let me be�.
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my poem(duh )...one of the first in which,i've described something that i've actually felt...and perhaps to some extent done some justice to that emotion

[Drageuth]

As long as we're posting, I'll post my poem thingy that I wrote and posted a number of times in Hangout and RetroParadise.

I love you like a budding heather;
I love the way you look in leather.
I love the way you wield the whip;
I love your fragrance on my lip.
I compare my love to a flying dove
When I should compare love, to love.

I corrected it because Tonberry is a ****ing pussy and won't allow me my poetic license without paying up my penis and 5 testicles.

And I must say, Solitude, that I love your poem. It's very good.

[Solitude]

Originally posted by D�m�ntia

I corrected it because Tonberry is a ****ing pussy and won't allow me my poetic license without paying up my penis and 5 testicles.

And I must say, Solitude, that I love your poem. It's very good.

thx...and,uhm...i hope you're trading goes off without a hitch

[Ton]

Originally posted by D�m�ntia
I corrected it because Tonberry is a ****ing pussy and won't allow me my poetic license without paying up my penis and 5 testicles.

Oh I was so looking forward to them too.

You didn't have to change it, I was stating my opinion.

[Roux!]

As opposed to many, many poems and stories I've read around here, I liked your poem... It's very good, and I'm very critical of this sorta thing, so nice work!

[Ryu]

Well i really dont like poems and stuff like that, but Solitude nice work m8

[youthquake]

let me be
let me be lowered down, like a casket
and buried just below her chest.
whatever i was searching for
"it was never you," she said.

-mewithoutYou

[Ryu]

Well all i can think of is:
Money's Scarce
Times Are Hard
Here's you're ****ing Christmas Card.

[Georgyw5k]

Beautiful Poem Sol , that rocked. you could make that into a song

[NaturalMystic]

nice poem solitude...i liked it a lot

[Ryu]

Me thinks we should give Sol a 5 vote for that one
Which i already did

[Solitude]

Originally posted by Ryu
Well all i can think of is:
Money's Scarce
Times Are Hard
Here's you're ****ing Christmas Card.

i actually liked that one better....frank and to the point.i've already given you a vote

[Ryu]

heh i just made it up on the spot, but ty Sol