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    Hmm - I'm tempted to use profanity here, but I'll censor myself. KnightofNachos, I suspect that you already knew that a long time ago. No need to rub it in.

    One more thing, dump the fifteen thousand alternate names (it's probably a mess to type). Now, when I can change my nickname again, I'll change it to something new, and will probably be keeping that for the rest of the time here. Hey - I don't even know why I changed my nickname that many times.

    Being a "mindless drone" doesn't seem to work very well either; you no longer perform your tasks with passion, and, when you lack that, you underachieve and underperform. Trust me - I've tried it.

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    My friend felt the need to make fun of a horrendous poem I wrote (that I have since deleted) and thus came up with this. It is not mine, but I think it's pretty good.


    A Poem To Mock And Embarrass Beyond The Basic Human Desire To Exist Those Foolish Patrons Of Juvenile Romance!

    Now eyeing as I've eyed before,
    The idle art of a creature both pitiable and naive,
    And deeming, with wisdom's dispassionate muse,
    My sorry self to be, a half-recovered victim of wretched, blatant idiocy.

    And with a cynic's appraising wit,
    Ensues my woefully vain struggle to invoke
    Some clue to how a sickeningly stupid desperation
    Leaves me so apt to scornful scoff, and to, upon my unremitting chortles of the utmost cruel mocking, choke.

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    I like your writing Drageuth. Keep em coming.

    you to sypher. I understand you writing too
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    Here is a poem I am gonna make right of the top of my head.


    I wake in the morning with a cheerful smile,
    to see my friends who had gone away for a while.
    I am very eager to go with them,
    I hope our godd friendship will never end.
    I have a great family they care so much for me,
    I don't know what they expect of me to be.
    I hope so far that nothing goes wrong,
    so far my life seems like a cheerful song.
    I might have done mistakes but who has not,
    that is because no one here is a robot.
    Well now it is time to go to sleep,
    liying on my bed counting the sheep,
    Just gonna wait till my alarm goes BEEP.

    This is a poem of the top of my head, it kinda suits my lofe but hey I have had days were I wake up p1553|).


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    Sleeping Alone Has it's Up's And Down's
    You Figure Out Stuff You Never Knew,
    You Die A Lonly Death,
    You Become Isolated From The World That Betrayed You,
    You Become Forgotten by The People You Love,
    You Get Used To It.
    Just look At Me.
    I Am Actually Fine With It.
    As a Matter of Fact, I Love It.
    Whether Or Not That Is Normal,
    I Don't Know And I Don't Care.
    Since I Am Alone And Fading,
    Only A Part Of Me Will Remain.
    What The Peice Is,
    I Don't Know But I Do Know This,
    It Will Be Blacker Than Judgement Day,
    It Will Be Hotter Than Hell,
    It Will Be Pulsing With Hatred,
    It Will Be Dripping With Tears,
    It Will Be Something You Don't Have
    And Somehting I Never Wanted.
    Give Up?
    So Do I...

    Dreaming Of Reality

    While Sleeping One Day,
    I Had A Dream For Some
    A Nightmare For Others.
    I Was Walking Thru My Home
    But I See My Family Is Different.
    My Brother Cared About Other People
    Rather Than Himself.
    My Father Was Wealthy And Wasn't An Asshole.
    My Mother Wasn't Smoking And She Wasn't A Bitch.
    But When I Saw Myself,I Was hiding IN A Dark Corner
    Hungry,Cold,Scared,Embarassed
    And looking For The Answer To My Life.
    When I Woke Up,I Found Myself In A Dark Corner
    Hungry,Cold,Scared,Embarassed
    And Looking For The Meaning Of My Life.
    I Looked Around And My Family Was Everything
    I Ever Needed But Never Recieved.
    I Wonder What Happened...

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    Alone when I was created
    Alone when I needed help
    Alone when I was in pain
    Alone when I was troubled
    Alone when I was ignored
    Alone when I died
    Alone is what I was meant to be
    Alone is what I will always be

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    I do not understand

    My eyes are within yours
    I see your mind open up to me
    I see your heart beating, hard.
    I can see your thoughts racing
    No, do not hide them.
    I see your fears, and they sadden me.
    I see your anger, and it frustrates me.
    I see your pain, and it weakens me.

    Why are you afraid? don't be afraid.
    No, do not run.
    I can see your fear
    Why are you frightened?

    I do not understand.

    My eyes are within your thoughts.
    always in your thoughts.
    I feel all your emotions,
    now you are afraid, still.
    Why can I not understand you?
    Tell me why

    My eyes are within your body
    peering at your small spirit.
    I see the spirit and it brightens me
    Yet I see the suffering in its eyes.
    Why are you still afraid?

    I do not understand.

    My eyes are your eyes, now.
    Look into me, see me.
    Speak to me.
    Understand me.
    Last edited by Schutzstaffel; 4th-July-2003 at 03:44.




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